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Dialogue

The Purpose of Dialogue #

Dialogue helps a novel chiefly by:

Characterizes, Reveals Motives #

We learn about others through interaction, and the root of it is dialogue. Readers use it to tell if they like our characters or not.

The way a character speaks reveals a lot about their internal state, like speaking rapidly shows they're running from something. It can also show motives and why they're doing anything at all in this story, making it arguably one of the most important elements. Effective dialogue lets these things rise up straight from the source, the character's internal world, that's shown and realistic to readers.

It can be indirect for much of the story. Characters can hem and haw, deny, and lie about their motives. Others can unreliably describe them from their perspectives. All this drives a story and is rooted in dialogue.

Sets the Mood #

The story's emotional pull is what keeps readers going, and dialogue should help set it by evoking the expected emotions. Character interactions are like feeling exchanges between them, and they should exchange the feelings you aim for.

Intensify Story Conflict #

Dialogue conveys what the character wants and the obstacles they face. Each exchange should move the story conflict somewhere new. Elements of the dialogue show it intensifying, like the Lead's growing desperation.

Create Tension and Suspense #

Dialogue should show something at stake. Tension and suspense should always be a dialogue element in some way. It can be conveying difficult goals, a conflict between characters, fighting against tough odds, or more. Without this, it's mundane and not worth reading.

Speeds up Scenes #

The description and narrative move the story more slowly. Action and (effective) dialogue speed it up. It conveys more info about where the story goes and the involved characters with fewer words and time needed to read it. This is from the back-and-forth nature of the dialogue.

Remember balancing fast and slow elements are needed to vary the rhythm and let readers catch their breath.

Add Bits of Setting or Background #

Instead of giving lots of exposition before the action, dialogue more quickly adds it in as the reader needs to know. They can also be worked in as beats around a dialogue exchange, which gives context and tension to the details for added interest.

Communicates the Theme #

The theme is carefully woven into different story elements, and dialogue is a great way to do this that's better than simply spelling it out. It's more emotional and upfront with the reader (as long as it's not preached obnoxiously or patronizingly).

Common Fears of Writing Dialogue #

What if my characters sound stupid, and not how I want them to sound? #

No one sounds 100% brilliant or 100% stupid all the time, so characters sounding stupid sometimes just makes them more human. Stupidity is subjective, so regardless of how stupid you think they sound, they may not and just keep talking since that's what they do.

The more you know your characters, the less likely this is to happen. Also, try reading your dialogue aloud on your own or with others to get a better perspective.

Plus, stupid dialogue can always be fixed in the second draft. Don't let it stop you.

What if my characters all sound the same? #

Part of preventing this is intimately knowing your characters.

Another part is remembering we all have different voices for different situations, even though our personality is pretty constant. Getting into your character's head to see their perspective is key. Hang around or watch people who would have similar voices. Write the scene several times, each time focusing on a different character's POV.

One trick is getting a new page and writing a stream of consciousness as that character to fully immerse yourself in their head and language. It can especially help with antagonists so they're not one-dimensional.

Also give your characters varieties in lives, careers, and experiences (if possible). Develop characters right to give them all enough variety.

What if my characters don't sound as the readers expect them too? #

Make your characters talk as soon as possible since what they say has a direct effect on our first impression of them. Otherwise, their dialogue can crush whatever alternative impression they've built up.

Also, make sure the physical description matches their speaking closely enough. If they deliberately break their appearance's stereotype or expectations, there should be some indication of that (including in their background).

What if the dialogue is flat and boring? #

The more you know your character's story, the more interesting you can make their dialogue. Make sure your dialogue contributes to some aspect of the plot at all times. Editing out dialogue like this is a second-draft concern since it's about tightening the focus.

What if the dialogue sounds stilted and formal? #

The dialogue needs to emerge from the character's identity and needs, not the writer's needs. Stilted dialogue happens when the writer is too focused on what the story needs. The solution is not trying to control the story too much. Let the word inhibitions go.

What if the character's dialogue makes them run away with the scene? #

This is good since it means your characters are fleshed out and driving more of the story. It's okay to rework your story around where your characters take you, since that makes the story more realistic to their characters and usually adds more conflict. A good character is like a real person in that they often say things you don't expect.

What if there's not enough narrative to let readers follow the dialogue? #

Pacing dialogue is tricky since some scenes call for more or less narrative elements around the words. Striking this balance simply takes practice.

The Genre, Mainstream, and Literary Story - the Dialogue Matters #

Make sure the dialogues' voices suit the kind of story we're telling. Below are several common dialogue types, often related to certain genres. Sometimes they overlap, sometimes they don't.

Magical #

Magical dialogue often has more built-in drama, no contractions, extra eloquence, and is more direct. It also only really works in sci-fi or fantasy settings like Lord of the Rings. It also takes lots of practice if it doesn't come naturally.

Cryptic #

Cryptic dialogue has double-meanings or abstract concepts that aren't clear at first. But once the full scope and info of the story are brought to light it suddenly gets a lot clearer. They can subliminally convey ideas to the reader too. It's indirect, subtle ambiguous. People can interpret them differently based on what they know or want to know.

It helps to see the world from multiple perspectives, to better see the ways it can be read. It's also often more enjoyable to the reader since it's not preachy, respects their intelligence, and requires work to find the meaning behind it. It also makes readers more receptive to ideas they may normally push back against.

Descriptive #

Descriptive dialogue is basically spoken exposition. It can still add tension and action between characters when done right. Showing the history and context through banter stops it from feeling like a documentary. Don't forget narrative thoughts and reactions from characters. Also, break it up into multiple sections or conversations so it doesn't drag too long.

Shadowy #

This dialogue fills readers with dread, suspense, or even terror. It foreshadows terrible things to come. An example is a cryptic dialogue from someone we may not trust, so there's suspense and anxiety if they're threatening another or not.

Good shadowy dialogue also keeps readers "in the dark" of what's real or important, potentially about the supernatural, so there's anxiety over what to believe. Our greatest fears are often in our own imagination, and this dialogue leaves room for those fears to fester and grow.

Breathless #

Breathless dialogue is all about suspense, increasing at a steady yet intense pace. Characters are in difficult, dangerous situations and struggling to find a way out.

Focus mostly on the dialogue for these scenes, only adding bits of action to move the story forward but not distract from the words. Use short, emotional bursts instead of long speeches or ponderings. Make sure characters express what's at stake with failure, but hold back enough info to keep the suspense going.

Provocative #

This dialogue deliberately makes readers think in different ways, provoking them into new thoughts. It should be driven by some kind of universal truth that can be expressed in different ways. These stories are more character-driven, with the characters discussing things bigger than themselves.

Uncensored #

Most adults censor themselves, and uncensored dialogue is when this doesn't happen, with adults or more often teens. As long as the dialogue isn't over the top with uncensored thoughts or slang. It's characters blurting out their honest feelings and worries, without any careful phrasing or double meaning to hide behind.

Dialogue that Pushes the Story Forward #

Dialogue can't be pointless, like all elements of a novel, and must move the plot forward in some way. It is a means to an end.

An easy trick to weed out unneeded dialogue is to just remove it and see if the story still works as well, if not better.

Provides New Info #

Similar to real-life situations where people say something that throws your world for a loop. Find chances for dialogue that changes a character's entire perspective on a person or issue. On average a novel should have 12 of these pivotal scenes, and dialogue is a great way to execute them.

Reveals New Obstacles #

Character announcements that reveal entirely new obstacles to overcome are also great. Doing so right in the middle of dialogue forces a reaction from the Lead and adds even more conflict. Even if the obstacles aren't huge or insurmountable, the protagonist should believe they are (for a while).

How your character responds to the obstacle is crucial for their characterization, so know your characters well.

Increases Suspense #

Seeing the stakes rise for the characters right before our eyes ramps up suspense well. Things slowly get worse and we realize that through the dialogue.

As long as the character interprets the events like the above, suspense is raised.

Furthers the Theme #

Announcing themes in dialogue takes creativity, and gives other characters a chance to respond. The character's responses to the theme are usually what pushes the story forward. It also, consciously or unconsciously, registers with the reader and keeps their interest (if not overdone).

Shows Character Transformation #

Characters change in subtle ways and not all at once, and dialogue can reveal the transformation in a layered, natural way. The words reveal the change itself and communicate it to both the reader and the other characters.

Reveals/Reminds of Goals #

The protagonist has goals in each scene, and dialogue is a great way to reveal them (and the obstacles they face). It works well since it's coming right from the character themself.

Keeping Your Characters in Social Settings #

Solo scenes are inevitable now and again, but scenes with at least two characters talking are more compelling. Structuring your story around social settings and dialogues helps keep the dialogue flowing, and therefore the plot moving.

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